I think the second peer review was more beneficial than the last. I was able to receive some good feedback about what I did well and where I could improve. I was also able to get ideas on where I can add more to lengthen my essay. I don’t mind if someone tears apart my essay so I do feel like my peer could have been a little more critical of my essay. Either way for some reason I am almost at a loss of words when it comes to writing this paper. Nothing is coming to me while writing this so fairly soon I will be asking prof Brod to review it. I know I have a lot to improve on or I may just be being a little hard on myself. 

As for my correction to my peers’ essay I think that also went fairly well. I believe I was able to give them some good feedback and they had a great start. It definitely seemed like that had put some time into their writing which was nice to read.